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Sunday's Atlas

Imagination has a way
of bringing you back
lingering fingers
printing a map
over me


Author notes

Prompt 'between my fingers, and suffocating on sundays'

15 words

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 20, 2008
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    Clever clever clever A shot poem but a darn good poem!!!!

  • carole21
    July 9, 2008
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    nice

    well done for a short write . . liked "lingering fingers printing a map" . . congrats on the trophy


  • marlene47 silver member
    July 8, 2008

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    Great title and link into body of poem... another brought back, the imprint of lingering fingers drawing a map on you.
    Congratulations on the Gold.
    Marlene


  • adsaige
    July 8, 2008

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    oh, this is so what i'm
    looking for. i thought i would
    have to give up hope that
    there wasn't a poem with sunday
    and such beautiful heartbreak.

    finalist list.

    thank you for your entry.

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