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common echoes among bystanders

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across three feet
are words stucked by glare,

and you prefer silence
to stand by softly,

and no words will slip
from thoughts to mouth;

alcoholed time drifts
often leading to clouds
of promiscuousness.













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Written March 24, 2008

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  • PassionateWriter09
    March 31, 2008
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    Thanks for the comment.


  • tara wilson gold member
    March 25, 2008
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  • Nicolette gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    So much here in these words, Hensley. I liked the "alcoholed time" and all that it implies... both physically and mentally!!

    ~ Nicolette