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rain and love.. mesh




Blue rain and achromatic clouds,
hover our moment and intensify as we stare onto each-others lips,
wondering.
Let the droplets of passion further motivate us
to take advantage of the aura of this situation.
I feel his fingers tangle into my saturated hair.
His pillowy, water ridden lips..quivering,
holding back from the complete insanity of patience.
I devote myself to this moment,
seeing the persuasion in his vibrant eyes,
fixed and focused.
I wrap my arms around him,
tasting the salty waters from the heavens above.
Proving mystical, magical, and fantasy can be a reality.
Cool rain, more satisfying as we feel every drop paint our bodies,
enveloped by each-others warmth.
Our senses are heightened, the taste of him has never been sweeter.
The touch of him; sensitive and acute.
The sight of his distinct,
richened face on such a natural, rare, and perfect background
accumulates 100,000 poetic words that leave me breathless..helpless.
I fall to my knees, weakened in contentment.
He falls with me,
cupping his calloused hands gently to my innocent face,
not letting up from this kiss that binds.
He lifts my frail body with ease,
seemingly trying to impress..trying to salvage.
He peels my clothes off in a imperative hunger as we enter the room,
finding my innocence erotic and fascinating.
I know now how 'woman and man' are distinctively defined.
Fresh cotton sheets,
instantly satisfies our needed warmth and gently aromatizes the room.
I bask in the feel of his want for me deepen.
I realize the complete monogamy of the situation we are in,
of us when my hands become apparent to him
and he grasps to intertwine his hand with mine.
My concentration is now heightened,
and the rain never sounded so loud..complete bliss.
I feel his savory of the last moments as I arch my back,
leaving my neck exposed to his liking.
The sound of his breath warming up my skin makes me more aware,
more climactic as every second passes and this second comes;
the few seconds that I value for a lifetime.

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  • Skittle Samurai
    March 30, 2008
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    Mmm... Reminds me of 'something'..

    I love it babes... the rain is definitely the best part. *mwah*


  • Brazos silver member
    March 26, 2008

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    Cool rain, and hot love, and the first time as well? Very intrigueing.

    Thanks so much for entering, and good luck in the contest.

    Novy and Brazos


  • ItsUrHomeboy
    March 25, 2008
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    Nice

    I love the detail and affection here. Wonderful write and very suspenseful for the fact that you just cannot stop reading all the way til the end. Thanks for the great read , "as my mind raced throught the lines I couldnt help but to smile and think , brilliant , this was just brilliant"