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As I Sit

As I sit on my kitchen floor

Blowing fruit scented bubbles

With syrup sticky fingers

I think of you and wonder

If you are that colorful skein

In that soapy sphere’s butt

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I love how awkward this is.

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  • BleedingDeep
    April 11, 2008

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    This is toatally awkard. But it diffently works...
    The great thing about it is that very few people are going to get it. I can tell that it's personal...And as i read it i did feel a sense of love. as well. It's an adoreabel poem!


  • FallenEngel
    March 30, 2008

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    ok

    Well.. hmm.. short and simple yet lovable haha.. good imagery and i love the end (yes im immature) Lolz. I love the imagery

    great work


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    March 25, 2008
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    skein??

    Haha,how cute though,syrupy??