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fragrance slides seduction
tempting lips kissing
in steps soft

of scintillating coruscations
that inflame emotions
in rainbow colors
of ecstasy

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image prompt, 20 words

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    A touching and sensual poem. Beautifully written. All the best in the contest


  • Topaze gold member
    March 25, 2008
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    Pretty

    A piece where I can actually feel the flutter, very nicely done. All the best to you.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    Sensually unique, the words paint the image in mind.
    The whole piece is beautiful
    Good luck hun
    Julie


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    Deeply creative with intense language use... x Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too... x Lavender Butterfly.