Break the future
crack the skull
let the worms feed
on the mother
before dawn
wilts the roses
annihilating
everything
Author notes
The butterfly effect
A contest entry
- picture prompt... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 25, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ahhh a very dark take on this prompt! Intriguing.. The butterfly effect indeed!!
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Very intense, love the direction you took this...way outside the box. A beautiful dark piece. All the best in the contest
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Very Strong
Powerful piece very well written. Al the best to you.
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How immensely creative of you... x Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too... x Lavender Butterfly.
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