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The Whispering Petals.

To love,
is like
catching the wind
on whispering petals.

Twirling in raindrops,
stomping in puddles.

To love is to be free.

Erasing memories
that used to be. 

To love is,
to be transfixed
by firelight.

Bottled sunshine...

Captured starlight.






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  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    December 17, 2008

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    this is really beautiful and has A LOT of meaning. i just wish i still felt this way... oh well...
    very nicely done...
    ~kassie


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    March 29, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful write, I enjoyed this so much. The imagery here is amazing and I really loved the last line. All the best for the contest.


  • Laura-Critchley
    March 28, 2008

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    Last line... wow, amazing.

    This piece is simple yet it just drips with beauty.

    I'm truly amazed and inspired by this piece.

    Very well done.

    Good luck in my contest and take care... Laura aka Maliha!