I set you free
your wings
no longer clipped
and you stay.
Flutters...
dance in my soul
as truth echoes.
Author notes
pic by Snow-Owl
20 words pic is prompt
A contest entry
- picture prompt... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 25, 2008, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love your take on the prompt... I have to say it's MUCH deeper than the picture itself... no offense to the picture... I just think that you message within the piece is so... moving and real... It reminded me of my husband. Congrats on the gold.
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A poem of true joy. Always wonderful when the little birdie hangs around.
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This is great and I see yet another gold. This is a better image of the old saying; "let him go, if he loves you he'll return". Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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lovely
lovely short write for the prompt . . truth prevails here . . liked "I set you free" and "as truth echoes" . . good first and last lines . . congrats on the trophy ..
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Congratulations on the wee yellow vase. Lovely poem.
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wow..loved it..xxx
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So much said in such few words. Simply put....amazing!
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Aww that was just lovely... reminded me of the saying if you love something set it free, if it comes back to you its yours....
Beautiful!
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Wow love this, the poem is beautiful and the page matches perfectly. Wonderfully done. All the best in the contest
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Beautiful page and beautiful write. Best of luck in the contest
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Pretty
Very nice indeed and a very smooth write. All the best to you.
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awww I love this..it's similar to my last poem I liked almost like a part two so to speak
Maybe that's why I like this so much lol very well done I hope u get gold 
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Wonderful
Freedoms flight and how true
Truth echoes.......
Julie
x
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This is absolutely beautiful... x Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too... x Lavender Butterfly.
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