Flutter to flutter;
likeness the same
Individual in uniqueness;
flutter flutter,
all the same
Now you shall flutter,
for life.
A contest entry
- picture prompt... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 25, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lovely piece...great take off the prompt....good luck
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A lovely write. Rhythmic. Very nice repetition and interpretation of the prompt. Best wishes in the contest.
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A wonderful piece. All the best in the contest
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Truly beautiful with such a lyrical feel... x Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too... x Lavender Butterfly.
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Nice work,
I enjoyed this beautifully inscribed piece here.
Thanks for sharing, all the best within the contest poet!
Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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Brilliant
I could find traces of mysticism here, that reminds me of sufi writings. A very good poem, which keeps creating more meanings the more we read. Congrats and Best Regards!
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i just love the first three lines of this, they are wonderful but after that, may i suggest finding an alternative word for flutter? just my opinion but i think it is overused on an otherwise wonderful poem
best of luck. be well and be blessed
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