Borrowed from an uncreated universe
where countryside remains unspoiled
colored images cradle constitution
expanding essence towards light
beyond the corporeal
Author notes
pic by Snow-Owl
A contest entry
- picture prompt... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 25, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nicely done here
enjoyed this soft take on the pic and your opening line led to believe that it was going to be a brilliant one - thanks for sharing my friend
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Made me feel like I was out in a field when beautiful colour surrounded me and light shone on me!
Very creative as always.. and beautiful!
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I however am not as eloquent with my words so I will just say that this was very deep and moving and your writes always spark something in me
Best of luck in the contest son. Be well and be blessed
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A beautiful piece, created lovely imagery of where I used to play when I was little. Superbly penned. All the best in the contest
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Nice
Very well written indeed and nice take on it. All the best to you.
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This was good! I like how you've set this one up. Whew I am glad I'm not lavender there are so many awesome poems in this contest and yours is greatest
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Another great write Mark.....loving your talent ....good luck
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Very deep and great use of language here... x Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too... x Lavender Butterfly.
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a tight mention
so pretty I'd try
sometimes words come into possibilities like a snapped back or better yet thinking of living relaxed and fully supplied to not need that remedy, but such reasonableness is still "expanding essence towards light
beyond the corporeal" currently. yet central leaning can learn of dependency on composition that won't be denied under other deals ultimately.
arousing as source of hope,
babies are my subject
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The language of your comments is a treat.
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i can see why you liked Bams comment. i got one from Bam on one of my poems too and it truly was a treat
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