Beauty needs no color
garish flutters drawn
sensual insinuations
moths chasing
eternal flames
warmth bestowed
by presence
She burns brightly
Author notes
Prompt: Pic by Snow Owl, 20 Words. To Lavender Butterfly, who holds all of these contests, reads each entry, and actually comments on every single one. *bows in appreciation*
In a list
A contest entry
- picture prompt... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 25, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful words for a beautiful picture: you did a really wonderful job with this. ' Tis beautiful, my dear.
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Oh thank you so much.. I was dreading getting to the end of this, because usually when I see poems with several short descriptive lines, they are just that... Meaningless descriptions and they don't have any verbs or closure at the end, its just a pile of pretty adjectives... I HATE THAT... But you didn't do that, you gave it an ending, I'm so proud...
Phew, okay, sorry for the ramble, but its one of my pet peeves.. So thankyou for not piling up a bunch of adjectives and leaving them with no purpose..
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Well written! Congratulations on the little brown jug.
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This is epic, and certainly deserving of a trophy. The words are so soft and soothing to the mind.
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Lovely write here, I love the words used, It gives such a lovely sense of imagery. Thanks for sharing I look forward to reading some others.
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Another lovely write by you!! Ahhh to burn brightly and have the moths to your flame!
Gorgeous!
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A truly beautiful piece. The imagery is stunning. All the best in the contest
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Lovely
Very well written piece and nice take on it. All the best to you.
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Beautifully my babes
This really took my breath away
I wish you luck and much love
Auntie
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Wonderful poem....nice message...2nd poem of yours I have read and I have enjoyed both immensely...good luck
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This is just lovely and immensely enchanting both in depth and creativity... x Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too... x Lavender Butterfly.
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Well Done Poet!
You have captivated in words the given prompt's inspiration.
I like what you've done with this one, keep it up.
Peace, and all the best in the contest!
-Timothy
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