Adversity brushed away by flutters;
in undertones of compassion,
quietude and ardor...
blanketed in sentiment
my mind undoubtedly
finds serenity.
Author notes
Picture prompt: 20 words
Pic by Snow Owl
In a list
A contest entry
- picture prompt... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 25, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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compassion is under-rated ~shrug~
the sense of questioning here is what got me ... your thoughts and words ALWAYS have a place Michelle, no matter what anybody tells you
congrats on the green thing
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Very beautiful and strong piece penned here
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Such a beautiful feel to this! Just gorgeous!
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Well done, poetess. One.
Dez
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Lovely peaceful words...serenity...yes, this describes the pic so well! Best of luck!!!
Az
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Wow, what a flow this has, stunning! Such enthralling words you have used, creating lovely imagery. A beautiful take on the picture. All the best in the contest
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Very Nice
Very nice smooth flowing piece, very well done. All the best to you.
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Wow....wonderful soft flowing write....great piece....good luck in the contest
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Truly creative and immensely captivating... x Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too... x Lavender Butterfly.
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