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Lost In Keys

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Promenading ivory, serenade stillness, cloaked in midnight's hue,
melodies melt unsung passions, energizing hearts longing and blue


 Flickering flames whisper against walls, caressing geometrical lines,
reviving heart-shaped room, with unfamiliar design

Stem's spring from crystal base, untouched, seemingly out of place,
filled, but tainted with single tear, reflecting image... her face

Tiny bubbles rise, release... infiltrating stillness with vintage,
drunken thoughts mirage desire, solitary, without advantage

Storming chariot... spinning, rescuing escalating breaths... panting,
burning inferno, internal ridges slide, while river rage... ranting

Engulfed, daylight mingles against anticipation's rhythm... touching,
unfastening barricades mentally mortared, uncontrollably... releasing

Sitting, perched between math, squared in seal, caged transparency,
voyeuristically  ensnared hunger, climaxing, twilight buoyancy

Baritone aches become duet, bringing bodies rise to ode,
saxophone blare... like shower in April, walls... explode

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments

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  • Such a beautifully executed piece to this image prompt and rightly adorned with gold. Congratulations my friend. This is an absolute gem. Well done. ~Pamela
  • ooooh this is a nice couplet poem.

    I love this take. I am not the biggest fan of end line rhyme but you did a amazing job with it here.

    Beautiful thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • ardentMarch gold member
    March 25

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    very sensual couplets...

    "Flickering flames whisper against walls, caressing geometrical lines,

    reviving heart-shaped room, with unfamiliar design"

    I love this one...I see some soft shadows of bodies moving against the walls




  • Beautifully sensitive and sensual. Excellent take on this image. Wonderful poetry. Best of luck my friend. ~Pamela

  • ashjoe76
    March 25

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    excellent

    true power of words here! you took me to a unique realm o passions. everything conveyed so well, musically. the picture is an inspiring one too. congrats and best regards!


  • LaylaLace
    March 24
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    I like the use of musical references. It's so different, I love it!
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