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Summit

Transitions carved from reconciled memories,

humming physical melodies within a storm,

escalating stimulations baritone sighs


Madness feigned, beneath linens silkened oasis,

questing plateau bridled in nectars adhesive


Unconverted symphony's raw pitch of aphrodisiac,

moistening arid flow, mid parting limb


Triangularly enticed physics predestining desire,

like seed nutted soft fruit, burrowing epicenter,

corked and screwed, pre-splitting summit

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Dalaney gold member
    March 26

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    I would have enjoyed this more had
    you not double spaced. It is also
    very difficult to follow - sometimes
    less is more. It is obvious that you
    love words, but make the words love
    you, too - if that makes sense.

    Love, Lane