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More Than A Feeling.

I know
that when I found that special one
the kisses can make me feel
like i can fly

their scent will be able to calm me down
a look in thier eyes would be dangerous
for fear of getting lost
in those orbs

they would be taller than me
just the right amount
making me stand tippy-toe
to give them a kiss on the nose

i could close my eyes
and be overwhelmed
we would fit perfectly together
better than a puzzle pieces


oh yes, this is more than a feeling.

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  • The Luna Diviner
    March 26, 2008
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    Aww little shelby is in love(with megan) lol

  • Tide
    March 26, 2008

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    *heartache*

    Why is it that you can portray feelings so undoubtedly as they are?Gah why am I such a hopeless romantic?lol well you definitly tell it as it is.
    Amazing
    Only one thing though
    "better than a puzzle pieces"
    Better than a puzzle peice
    or
    Better than puzzle peices
    Plural and singular cannot go together
    Just a suggestion
    Other than that brilliant..as always -_-'


  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    "oh yes, this is more than a feeling."
    Awwwww.....
    Love it!!
    Who's it about??
    Hmmm???

    Anyways, GREAT poem!!!
    Love it!
    [[as previously stated]]


  • Raining
    March 25, 2008
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    aww... nice poem it so sweet!