fast cars
strip bars
seeing stars
dreams at sixteen!
dark love
Lord above!
push to shove...
sweet sixteen!
new tears
hot fears
odd leers
I just turned sixteen!
There's so much to do,
and so much I want.
My new life,
so close to adulthood
and so far away.
A contest entry
- Sweet 16 contest for me!! by Lost In Dreaming.
1600 points, ended March 26, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what to improve
Comments
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YEs, sweet sixteen - with all of your life left to live - a wonderful age. Happy Birthday and many more. Easy to read and understand the words in this poem. Keep writing.
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cool--i really like it--especially
new tears
hot fears
odd leers
I just turned sixteen!
♥ meg -
this is really sweet very short and very happy
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Nice write and so true. 16 is so close to adulthood but so far away. Best of luck in the contest.
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