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"Lessons Learnt"



Withered and tarnished,

betrayal exploding,

shadows replenish,

                time allows all reflections

                                            to ache behind illusions.

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Word Prompt: Echoes of Yesterday.
15 WORDS

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    April 1, 2008

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    This is a grand piece of poetry. The vocab is solid, it is a strong from start to end. The whole feeling really seeps into you and I love the ending line. Excellent.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 25, 2008
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    Very strong emotions here that flow the whole way through, great choice of words and expression.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    An excellent piece you have inscribed here.
    Thanks for sharing, a well done versed piece indeed.
    With the great prompt I might add. Peace. -Timothy aka poeticweaver~


    • doyouloveit
      March 24, 2008
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      thank you very much my dear glad you enjoyed this piece and yes i did think this was a great prompt as well!