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True Love

The essence of love

is not in the giving and taking,

or in the free expression of feelings,

nor taken for granted, that this person will

look into our souls to see who we really

are, we can't expect them to take us at

face value for the beauty that is

shown on the outside through

our appearances of talk,

face and emotional

expressions. It is

heart to heart,

spirit to spirit.

True Love

can only

be.

 

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My personal thoughts written in a new form I am trying! If commenting, please be kind!

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 27, 2008

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    So true this write is

    In being human we all make mistakes and we learn from those mistakes . Love goes beyond the mistakes and hold the roots for growth and if you should pull up those roots before the tree blooms how would you ever know true love for true love comes with memories good and bad and often tears feed the soul of the tree and we learn the true meaning of love and commitment

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    March 27, 2008

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    I think this is very nice indeed love is the greatest gift we can offer or recieve thanks for sharing goodluck in the contest much love


  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    It looks really good but, most importantly, your words are so true. It all blends together, the picture, words, design are a joy.

  • myacidwords
    March 24, 2008

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    wow. i really like this one. not only is the flow smooth and the style refreshing, the words also speak straight to the soul.... how so true....


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    Awesome!

    How wonderfully worded sweet soul.
    I adore the way you expressed yourself here.
    Love the flow, and form. You've got style.
    Keep up the wonderful works. Peace. -Timothy aka poeticweaver~

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