Bang! Bang!
The sound that changes everything
My life will never be the same
And neither will yours.
A contest entry
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Comments
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I thought of Chitty Chitty Band Band when I saw the title...random I know
"My life will never be the same..and neither will yours" Wow. I really like this. Short. Simple. And very strong.
Warmest,
Mylee -
well then...
this is stuff i already know the gun, the bang, and the horror that follows and i would have liked for more details but io understnd its a prewrite... Thank you for entering !!!! -GOREgous Gore -
This was short and
Could be taken in many different ways
I really liked this..
Best of luck..
Angel
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yeeeeeeeeeeeeah! bang bang then
reminds me of my ole skool hubby john witherspoon oh yes i like this its a nice take on a propmt*thumpup* thanks for sharing it with me
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wow
so short with such a permanent end.
luck in the contest.
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Personally, I found this piece to be a bit more straight forward than I like in my poetry. You words spell out exactly what images the mind should conjure up, though that is nt always a bad thing. As I said just not my cup of tea. Thank you for entering. Best of luck to you.
Blessings
Bel
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Thoughts
This is very intriguing... blunt but at the same time, it gives off a deeper sadness that you don't want to show while trying to submerge your words with fluidity. Best of luck -
If shots ring out and it changes two people's lives, then that sounds like a bad thing in my books. Much said and implied in these few lines. Readers are left to imagine all kinds of things.
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you are so very right
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Hmmmm, if you are going the same way as I'm thinking then yes their life, or lack of, will never be the same again
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Wow..it says soo much, in only a few words. I like the way you ended it..fantastic job. Keep writing!
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wow very good in just a few words you descripe a life changing event
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Wow,
An impact that makes one think of death, and all the ways it changes those still living, and left behind. And ofcourse the one who used to breathe, does not no more. Peace. -Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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