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The Ultimate Prize of the Universe

 

Mindless within the cerebellum

far away from the frontal lobe

the antithesis of all decorum

and the ruin of hard-won civility,

this one thought drives us mad with desire…

 

Made more irresistible by resisting it

grown more beautiful by concealing it

defeating every conscious attempt to tame it

exposing the inner beasts within…

 

Making a mockery of reason and logic

manipulating the heart with master strokes

answering every reason for being

beguiling the seeing no less than the blind…

 

A pool we long to dive deep into

a line we wish to ever cross

a part of nature we cannot guess

the meaning of, yet nevertheless

seek it to the point of recklessness...

 

Do not pretend it is not there

behind every decision, behind every action

beneath every thought ever formed,

this ultimate prize of the universe…

 

Woman has guessed its benefit and meaning

far more than Man, still primitive,

perhaps designed so for initiating the act

without pause, without thinking;

a guarantee, so to speak,

designed deep within the genes

born from the dust of this cosmic womb

   

 

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  • Dalaney gold member
    June 1

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    "Do not pretend it is not there

    behind every decision, behind every action

    beneath every thought ever formed,

    this ultimate prize of the universe…"

     

    And so, today begins my journey into Wbiro...I decided to read a poem from each one of your lists and then, repeat the process...I had to start with erotica because erotica is difficult to pull off well (at least, on this site it is) and you did not disappoint.  I highlighted the above stanza because quite simply...this is truth as I know it, and you could not have said it any better.  

     

    love, lane


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    March 31, 2008
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    Fine piece of work - congratualtions on the bronze!


  • KayJay
    March 30, 2008
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    Well done! Congratulations on the recognition. It's well deserved.
    Ken


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    indeed...you amaze me.
    Best wishes to in the contest, and the best thing in this universe is right here..your talking to her lol.
    j/k...

    Love
    Passions


    • wbiro gold member
      March 24, 2008
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      Oh, I get into trouble no matter who or what I talk to... I think trouble is part of the package, for some ever-elusive mystical reason... I'm sure there's a higher purpose, all I can do is sigh...!

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