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Not quite haiku, boo boo (yogi bear messin up again)

while I walked,
sun & wind play:
words towards sword.



MACK
rumble:
go!




march
mud--
mad!



red bird
sings signal
spring.



Found round stone
water from bottle--
lichen garden.


Down hill walk
concrete:
abstract gravitas.



west wind
memories
life, death.


Knox Park Green Street
______________________now
i know it's here.





Author notes

Composed while walking down hill on moraine not far from Nunda Township, toward McHenry, past Volo Bog.

Laisser les bon temps rouler! Let the good times role, cousin!

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