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Postcard from the Ledge

Arkbear,
How are the quarters?
Heard they were tight!
That would be in square cubits
(did I get that right?)
I'm standing on Ararat
with my head held high
watching monkeys tread water
and birds drop from the sky!
It's been cool enough,
as I'm neck deep in water,
but since the rains began I
haven't seen your son or daughter.
Is your wife alright?
Have you caught the flu?
I wanted to come,
but they only took two.
Hope you get this card
and it gives you a laugh,
I sent it by dove.
Sincerely your friend,
Arkgiraffe

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  • Patpowers
    March 25, 2008
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    Good luck with this Vic! Very original work and Arkbear is one of the best! THANKS!!!


  • Marcy Anna
    March 25, 2008

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    Oh fun stuff! This poem was so bouncy and lighthearted I felt like I was given an honored chance to peak into a world of close friends and life-loving people. Really enjoyed reading this


  • Poesing
    March 25, 2008
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    This is very cute - and original. Great idea.


  • Fourthaxis
    March 25, 2008

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    Wow, i was thinking of entering this contest but didn't, for the want of an inspiration.You have nailed it though! >laughs< Very witty! b' luck!


  • twaintwine
    March 25, 2008
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    You Go Too Far

    I don't think it's polite to poke fun at the poet sponsoring a contest. You have some nerve! Give me a break and visit my original music at www.nakedadam.net and why not comment? I surely would appreciate it!


  • islekine
    March 25, 2008
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    I'm still laughing...

    Write on! Best wishes in the contest.
    *PEACE*

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