We cannot magically mend your aching heart,
Nor take your pain away.
But we can stay to take your hand
and walk with you today.
We'll listen when you need to talk;
and wipe away those tears.
Theres no need to go it alone;
We'll be there to help you face your fears.
We are here and will stand by you.
If theres a mountain you can't climb...
We will support you
And take it one step at a time.
You are not alone, for we are still here.
We will go that extra mile
Just to see you smile!
The rest is up to you...
Author notes
A poem for those who seem to forget @_@
...Oh when i got to the point in which i wanted to finish with the poem i realized that "we" wont be able to help you get a good ending to your poem... cause mine didn't end like i wanted it to >_<
Help me fix the errors!... but other then that all other comments are welcome ~
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Love it! It's great you should write more often your extremly good at writing <3 i'm no good at it...your waay better...nice job and keep up all the good work.
Maddie
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aw... cute! hahahaa I told you i would comment it!
I already told you what i thought, but... Ill repeat
"Great poem! I love the rymes" (btw, I like your new page and face)
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Who is this about me or Jenny? but stilll a good poem
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If Theres a mountain you *Can't* climb...
Nice job, and oh so true. I'm one of those that offers to help all the time, and seem to be expected to have a dream cure for bad endings and traumatic tales. I don't have those powers. I can listen, I can give advice, but no, I can't heal hearts or broken bones.
Good luck and keep on writing
-Danneh<3 -
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And Thanks I Appreciate the Help and Friendly Comment
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