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Flight of Love

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Two white Doves in love
With their graceful wings in flight
Romancing the wind
Power of natures wonders
Release passion to the world

My heart opens wide
Observing natures blessings
Purest form of life
Consecrating their grand love
Like flowing spirits embraced

United love spread
Feeling warmth and desire
To all souls bonded
With Their graceful wings in flight
Release passion to the world









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A Triple Tanka

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  • Kathraina silver member
    January 1
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    Good write!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Heroesrox
    December 30, 2008

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    Awesome job. Keep up the great work and keep writing great pieces like this one!!! You have enough talent for probably all of us here at Allpoetry! Truly a great write. Such an astoudning and amazing job. If you feel like it, check out my poems and feel free to comment them! Be honest, please! Thanks so much for sharing this piece with all of us here at Allpoetry!
    Oh, I just started a new contest! Please take a second to view it and try your hand at it if you wish!

    Here is the link to my new contest! http://allpoetry.com/contest/2431805

    Thanks so much! Have an awesome day!

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Hereosrox~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

  • chiefmac
    September 11, 2008

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    This evokes strong images where the beauty of dove in flight. The reader is brought to share the wind beneath the wings of flight. Lovely metphor to release love upon the world.


  • gullionmar
    September 1, 2008
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    very well done

    congrats on trophy well writen pece


  • JustFallingApart
    July 18, 2008

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    "Release passion to the world" beautiful write, i realy liked this piece. It was so wonderful and inspiering, you did such a wonderful job on this, nice work. Keep the pen flowing

  • InBetweenThoughts
    April 12, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry...my apologies for the delays in judging..best wishes, Ken IBT

  • midnightblue1272
    March 25, 2008

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    Beautiful!

    I suddenly feel very peaceful after reading this. I loved that last stanza; brings a lot of hope. Fine work, Mom.


  • Rachel Kruger
    March 25, 2008

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    Well done Lisa! You've outdone yourself. Straight from the heart and very well thought through. I have tried tanka before, not easy to me. You've mastered it.

    Good luck with the contest!

    Love,
    Rach


  • Ephiphany
    March 25, 2008

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    Beautiful Tanka sis,

    you always pen the most lovely creations in Love.
    Truth, and Honesty. Good luck, and it's good to see your heart again

    Love you

    Ephiphany

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