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No rest

My toes
curled around the bed's end

speak loud enough
to break my room

forcing a look of defeat
that compels me to feel ~  
                                          something

and I lift
from unused sheets
where the sound of slumber
fails to embrace my soul

writing every breath
on paper thin exposure
dark thoughts
on my midnight express
                                        to nowhere...

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  • layla.
    March 26, 2008

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    thanks so much for entering this in my contest. i was rather disappointed till now.
    clever and wonderful writing.