Say you love me ,tell me you love me, let me hear you, show me you love me,
Make love to me.
I want to feel your love surround me, I want it to consume me,
Take me over, take me away.
Lay me down, let me feel your love deep inside of me.
Filling up my body, I crave the love you give to me,
Love running down me from the moment you touch my lips, make love to me.
Let me feel your love as you slide into my hips.
Take me away into the place where its only you and I,
Take me away to that place, let out bodies collide.
The heavy of our breaths coincide,
Breathing deep in your ear, you get deeper inside.
Feeling your hands on me getting tighter, taking me higher.
Farther away from this place, louder, but not a sound.
Slowing moving down across me, exploring my map.
Following no direction, you conquer me.
A cross country drive, no limitations, make love to me.
The windows all down, the breeze blowing up my skirt,
No shoes, with feet out the window,
Music beating loud through my body.
Oh, we’re passing the state border, 90 miles an hour,
Its never felt better to make love with you, create love with you.
No stops signs, no street lights,
The only direction we are headed is deeper into each other.
Make love to me, show me you love me, let me hear you, tell me you love me,
Say you love me.
A contest entry
- Bleed Your Emotions by theredcatjazzoflove.
745 points, ended March 25, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tell me a Story by TabbyCat.
750 points, ended April 2, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"The only direction we are headed is deeper into each other" fantastic, this line. A little risque for me...but I can't say I wasn't aroused. Thanks for the entry.
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let out bodies collide ~ let our bodies collide
other than that you put a whole lot of mixed emotions in this piece good luck in the contest -
This is a beautiful poem and everything. Great picture. But no option number. I will givee you a break, you have 5 min before I dQ it. I said specifcally in my rules.
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