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Orb of the night

Crescent moon gliding
in the nightfall.
Reaching shades
of nature in the
soft azure.
Below the boughs
are drifting.
Flares of aging time
as the lunar reaches
its fullness.
Through the night
sublime.

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  • Kari gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    This was BEAUTIFUL...I loved it from the beginning to the very end..very well done with this piece


  • Roaddog Wolf
    March 25, 2008
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    VERY NICELY PENNED for a poem of such brevity well done


  • Roaddog Wolf
    March 25, 2008

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    Please if your going to post an entry, do so. I will hold off judging to give you time to post if you would like