He was born a wizard and did not know
He lived with Muggles.
To Hogwarts he wanted to go
Voldemort killed his parents
and gave Harry fame.
For the scar on his head
Voldemort is to blame.
Now Harry has more sorcery,
the magic to set his relatives free
Author notes
promt: Harry Potter
I am 7
A contest entry
- Quickie-HP Style by trinajean.
425 points, ended March 31, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contest for ages 14 and under:A poem you think you want to write or have written well! by pop123.
475 points, ended April 10, 2008, 15 entries
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400 points, ended April 17, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Ultimate Goal by N e a r.
20000 points, ended June 2, 2008, 946 entries
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450 points, ended July 1, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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who isn't in love with the Harry Potter series ?! i mean c'mon, it's like, one of the best books ever written ! if it was a little longer, i think it would be evener better but great job anyway :]
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ok at this point i think the poem is not finished.... it sorta left me hanging just as i was getting into the flow of the story. i like it so far but whats the rest? and the meter its in ends on the up stroke and the the meter carries us to the point past it in which there is no line to complete it. also i dont know if this is mostly just an overview of the story or not. but i think there is a more creative bone in you and that if you think on this one a bit you could hatch a brilliant brain child. i think this one is still in the shell and needs a bit more mothering before its ready to hatch. please however do not take my words against yourself, nor your poem. i like it so far just take me further. i have read the books all seven of them and love them but if i hadnt i dont think i would know what the hype about them was all about form this one. reach into me and grab me and pull out something wonderful to add to this one. i will check back to see what it grows into
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Very nice ...
and thanks for entering.
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i liked it!!! i am a bit of a Harry Potter geek. I thought that it was really good for a 7 year old, I could never write like that when I was 7. AWESOME!!!
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Oh, I just love the Harry Potter movies!!! They are so awesome and I'm 49 years old!
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it's cool. good poem. I love reading Harry Potter
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well written, but i also think it could be perhaps a little longer. but great job for a 7 year old
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It's short and simple. I like the flow of the poem. Though, perhaps you should make it a little longer. A little more descriptive. Though it's fine how it is. Great job hun.
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i like harry potter so i love your poem
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Fabulous poem,I love the Harry Potter books!
Thanks for entering my contest
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Very good! I'm sure Harry Potter would be proud! Good luck in the contest.
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Well done Nathan7.
The ending was great!
Keep reading and writing and work hard at school, and who knows? You might be the next J.K. Rowling.
P.S. I like Harry Potter, too!
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Very good Nathan. Are you a Harry Potter fan? Your poems are getting bigger and better every time you write them. I'm impressed. Good luck in the contest.
Brian -
good
nathan this poem is good, i hope you have good luck in the contest, you had a good idiea with it, keep writing, -love your mom
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Um, Im just a tad bit confused.
Who is the relative that he wants to set free?
I have a theory, but I'm not quite sure.
I liked it! I think you could have done more with it, but who am I to judge someone else's piece of writing. Good Job! Thanks for entering and Good Luck!
Oh, one more thing, Voldemort is spelled with no r.
Good Job though.
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