There is only one thing for me to say to you.
It only takes just one breath.
No more, no less.
I say it because,
Well... no one else makes me feel this way.
It is why I wish to spend forever with you.
This, I've been dying to say, but you don't let me say it.
So let my say it now...
"I love you with all my heart and soul."
Nothing more.
Author notes
KokoluvsDaniel: so originally this was in like 15 lines but I made it into 10. that's why some lines are way long... hope you like it!
A contest entry
- It's All About Love. by Poetryintheblood.
425 points, ended March 30, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How did you like it? Anything to fix?
Comments
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quick and to the point :] i totally understand it good job
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie
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Very nice. It's really good, the lines fit together, and overall, it's a great performance! Keep it up!
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