fuck this life
i cant have any fun
everyone's frowning on me
like im some kind of a disease
so slit my wrists and hold me tight
im swimming towards a new paradise
eyes filling with tears
crying over nothing
and age 18
they look down on me
with these thoughts in my head
but i just cant be happy like them
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anyone want to help me re-write this?
meh
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anyone want to help me re-write this? meh. lol. I would have to say the best lines, in my opinion, are "So slit my wrists and hold me tight I'm swimming towards a new paradise". very hardcore. you sound so professional!!
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I know it took me a long time to reply, but thanks for saying its hardcore and i sound professional. lol
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Interesting
Y do u need help rewriteing it
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cuz it sucks as is.
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