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A new love and a murmur,beautiful prayers aloud.
a glossary term of love, and heartache astounds
Love.
beautiful butterflies and daisies galore
A purple flower and  pansies.
more.
A garden of eden amongst lonely nakedness.
perfection and acceptance
stay.
create an existence among mortals
portals with souls leaving.
create.
an immaculate script
A perfect clone.
here we are and lonely.

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 24, 2008

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    I love this beautiful imagery that you have used to capture the craving of an ideal existance (acceptance, even?). I really love the second line which speaks to me as follow your heart to a true love, not a "textbook example" of what you think it is, or you will find misery. Amazing write baby, I love it.


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    ♥ whisper


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    Wow,

    A piece here you have weaved to make the readers ponder a bit.. I like it! Thanks for sharing, and pen on poet! Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~