Your breath-taking red dress.
My old jeans and a t.
The house to ourselves.
No one around.
One ring,
One kiss,
One unforgettable answer.
In the bedroom of a two story house,
A true journey began.
With the love of one woman.
Undoubtedly changed the plan.
With one beautiful smile,
That still plays across her lips,
And with an enchanting spell,
That no one should have power to possess.
With a glance that in one instant can make the whole world stop,
And leave you breathless, no second thought.
With two people,
And two stories,
Entwining as one.
She always looks as beautiful as she did that night,
Over Dominoes pizza in the candlelight.
Author notes
Rye-09. It's about the day I proposed to my girlfriend.
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Oh, that is so cute and adorable! I love it! Thank you and good luck. Congratulations, you are on the finalists list.
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Awe what a beauiful poem! And what a lucky lady! How beautiful!
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That is very beautiful and how romantic. Nobody ever said that life had to cost a fortune. And here you displayed that well. Love doesnt cost money, her beauty and your embrace, cost you the rest of your life. The best wishes, and that is so wonderful. It sent chills down my back as I read your poem. Bright emotions and defiently showed your true colors...Thank you and good luck!! :] -
I love it!!!!!!!!
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very cute i liked this
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An insight to your relationship that I really didn't need to see, Rye, but eh, not bad. I like the rhyming. It's cooll...
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