Not every girl's dream
But the one for me
I know now love is supreme
It took a long time to see
He grows his hair
Forgets to shave
But what we share
Will last till my grave
He really is a sight
I call him names
We stay up all night
Playing silly games
That's the life I want
In which he plays a part
I write it in big font
Sketch it on my heart
He wakes up late
And forgets to call
Constantly making me wait
But catches me as I fall
The way he looks at me
Takes away all that's bad
Me and him makes we
And for that I'm glad.
This is for my boyfriend, 1 Year and 3 months ago it was all a joke but we've come far x
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Awwww this is so cute! I loved reading it and the last stanza was so adorable.
I really miss you on this site. 
I hope you come back one day. 
Take care dear
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ADORABLE!
this is cute that you wrote it for him... and i'm glad that your happy and have been together this long i LOVE the line about "sketch it on my heart" this is cute.... although abit cliche.... like... i think you are an AMAZING writter and this doesn't display your skill as well as you could... some of the rymes are forced... so you might look at that... but... its very sweet and i wish the two of you the best luck! -
Wow, that's more than twice my longest XD but i'm happy for you, and i'm glad to see you back and writing and no guys perfect, just saying that to all the girls out there >.> <.<
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Aw, this is so beautiful. I liked the second stanza the best. It shows how people can accept or look past the little so called faults in others and be grateful for the love that they have in life. Congrats on being with your boyfriend for over a year. I wish the best for you both.
Keep writing.
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