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A Despicable Red

Twisted truths fabricate lies
Creating a world of murder and despise
Spiraling out of control, a whirlwind of hate
Hells fire is nothing you can sate

It burns everyone, corrupting those we know
Turning their eyes red with that despicable glow

Driven by the thought of glory, justice isn't known
They tower over everything; sitting on their gory throne

Fierce desires for power dominate them all
No one stands in their way, one by one we fall

And when nothing remains, not even the blue of the sky
Only then will that despicable red vanish their eyes

Author notes

Ahh dark philosophy. This write symbolizes that power-hungry tyrants will stop and nothing to get what they want -- and when they finally do achieve that manic state of power .... they may finally be able to comprehend an essence of what they have just done ... but by then it's too late.

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  • xeroabyss II
    November 14, 2008

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    And thus Babylon fell, as did Rome, and soon the U.S.
    For no nation, nor civilization built of war and conquest can ever truely survive.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    Wow this is really good love the flow and rhyme too. Keep up the excellent penning. Thanks for your comment


  • mathu is dead
    March 24, 2008
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    sad but true

    love it!