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A step into the unknown


The past hangs around my feet,
like heavy baggage to big to hold,
and every step forwards,
is a thousands steps back
Until I'm there, where i started
In the dark, in the shade,
in the abyss of my life.

I always wanted a different life,
Always thought there was another path to follow,
And here is my chance,
my get-out clause

So make a toast and drink with me please,
And I will take that final step into the unknown

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  • Dark Prince Chaos
    October 21, 2008
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    a true beauty indeed i love it love it great work truly -bows- i must say truly a perfect write


  • XxForeverFaithfulxX
    July 2, 2008

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    Bravo...

    This was really good! I like the ending part the best. "So make a toast and drink with me please, And I will take that final step into the unknown" This was amazing! Keep up the good work!^_^


  • BehindTheShadow
    March 24, 2008
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    Cheers.


  • peridotPixi
    March 24, 2008

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    i really like the take on this promt with a step into the unknown, its cool how everything flows together, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy