so you think you care?
everyone keeps telling me, "they'll always be there"
but who's ever there when things get so hard....
that taking your life becomes a thought.
everyone thinks they're such a great friend
that they've mended you when they make you 'smile'
but only the true friend can see it's a plee for [HELP]]
Suicide sounds like music
after its over there's no more pain, no more suffereing....
and no more [LIES]]
...all i have to do is pull the trigger and it'd all be over and done....
[BANG]]
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Can I have my friend read your poem??? I think that this is exactly how she feels. I'm totally bookmarking this. I think it will help my friend's friends realize some things.
This poem has a lot of emotion. I like it. Keep up the great job.
Nicely penned.
My fav lines:
Suicide sounds like music
after its over there's no more pain, no more suffereing....
and no more [LIES]]
...all i have to do is pull the trigger and it'd all be over and done....
[BANG]]
(Okay so technically its the last stanza. lol but I really like it.)
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