What can I do,
when all I think
about is you?
Author notes
yea I jus had to get that out, most everybody knows who this is about.
Written December 5th, 2003
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It won't let me on there either, Maddy! What's up with that?!? Lol.
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Dude! Maddy! I've been trying to get to your AP page to tell you Merry Christmas! But like..it won't let me on there! Yeah..weird. Anyways..I'll just have to tell you on here..sooooo...
MERRY CHRISTMAS, MADABOO! -
::agrees with Jackie::
Kick ass poem, Maddy.
Good job!!!
Sarah
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I ahev to agree with the others ...this is so raw and simple yet it is really deep if you let it be....thanx ...
SHEP -
This is not cute...this is not sweet. This is so deep and great. This is the essence of poetry: take raw human emotion and raving thoughts and compile them into the most succinct thing possible. I love this, Maddy. I'm impressed.
Jackie -
I KNOW TOO!!! lol..short and sweet..reminds me of myself..haha..just kidding!1 Good poem! lol
don't worry about him!
Val -
OMG!! Hannah, I can't believe you don't know who this is about!! lol I definitely for sure know who this is about! But anyways I understand exactly how you're feeling...maybe cuz I hear about it everyday but it's cool! This was short and to the point! Good write!
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Okay...Hannah feels very deprived! Cuz I definitly don't know who this is about!...No one tells me anything! Grrr baby!Anyways this was a cute write!You should write some more you haven't written in a while!
**Hannah -
this is short and sweet1 i love it...it is how i feel and i can relate to it! good write!
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