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Pondering the Looking Glass!

Our lives mysteriouly
mirror the twilight,
as we're caught between
the dimensions of many realities.
Each one of us are intertwined
in the recipe of cosmic destiny.
Filtered in a fusion of colors,
nakedly portrayed in the silhouettes
of passion and love.
We're jaded by our most intimate fears
as we navigate through the
quagmire of a surreal existence.
We reach endlessly for the stars,
peering through windows of bewilderment.
Hoping for life answers to unfold
as we embrace the sacred vows
of trust that creation provides.
Ascertained deep in the hearts
of our immortal souls.


Author notes

This poem was inspired by,
Image Echo by Leila Kubba Kawash 1996

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    April 5, 2008

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    "Each one of us are intertwined
    in the recipe of cosmic destiny."

    Indeed we are dear poet, indeed we are.

    A very strong and powerful entry. Thank you for this. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela

  • Durlon
    March 25, 2008
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    well done

    Beautifully written. Lyrical. I like the subtle alliteration. Poignant.


  • Whisper Mckee
    March 24, 2008
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    This is a great write and it makes you think.


  • sapphireangelwings
    March 24, 2008

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    Oh my...I loved this! It just flowed from one thot/ idea to the next just as smooth as silk. Wonderfully thought out and penned!


  • secberm
    March 24, 2008

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    Well done, poet. The only word that comes to mind is: Fanstastic. Actually, "Intelligent" also pops in there. Write on and good luck. One.

    Dez

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