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Nature

 

Each living thing is connected spiritually~

yet about this some would hardily disagree

 

Nature is the course or order of all things~

the basis' of life, the inter-connecting of rings

 

Man can't exist without what nature gives,

for even in each of us a piece of nature lives

 

Look at the whole of what the life cycle means~

from the smallest dust particle to our very own genes

 

Animal or mineral all have a natural core~

some are viewed passive while others create war

 

Getting back to the basics is what we should do,

living in harmony with nature and appreciating the view

Author notes

Picture Prompt:
http://www.artandnature.com/doolittle/sacredcircle.html
The painting is by renowned artist Bev Doolittle and titled Sacred Circle.

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  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    amen! Very nicely penned, I agree wholeheartedly with your viewpoint. A thoroughly enjoyable read, thanks for entering.
    Rory

  • judmc
    March 28, 2008

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    Excellent

    Quite a nice poem about the balance of nature
    anyone who contravenes the natural laws pays the penalty like pesticides g.m. foods and polution for example. Getting back to basics is right on.
    Yes quite an excellent poem indeed. I enjoyed reading it.When you're on my patch can I recommend "Peters Girl"or "The Waife" for your delectation.
    Best Wishes George.+++ Keep Writing!!


  • SpiritMother
    March 26, 2008

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    What a lovely write in honor of Mother Earth and all her children, great and small. That sacred circle in which we all live, to be forever turning, in sacred harmony..of this I pray. Good Luck in the contest, a very wonderful write, indeed!

  • June-bug
    March 25, 2008

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    excellent write...very well said get back to the natural order of things...man is so foolish...to think that we can turn the world when there is one mightier than ourselves. Enjoyable read.

  • June-bug
    March 25, 2008
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    excellent write...very well said get back to the natural order of things...man is so foolish...to think that we can turn the world when there is one mightier than ourselves. Enjoyable read.


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    WONDERFULLY EXPRESSED!!!

    I feel this exact same way, to return to the simple ways of nature and to let her beautiful ways guides us like she did our ancestors.

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