Images
Captured.
Impassioned.
Black and white,
Yet filled with color.
Remembered.
Seen through hearts' cameras
Moments.
Smiles to mislead,
With haunted eyes to addle.
Thoughts unseen.
Maintained poses.
Life.
In a list
A contest entry
- Rounds CONTEST 2nd ROUND!!!!! by Luminescence.
700 points, ended May 2, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honest opinions please... I want to know what you actually think so don't sugar-coat your comments.
Comments
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9/10
This was a very interesting poem. Even better than most of my writing!!! Well, you do seem to be very passionate about poetry and that is wonderfull to see. Keep on writing!
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Very nicely done, I like it
You have painted a beautiful picture with your words. Being a rhymer I found this very hard..yours reads so smoothly you make it look real easy. All the best in the contest
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This was a nice poem.
Your score in this round will be out of 10…. Your score was: 9... negative one for having a period after every line... its a pet peev.. sorry...
Overall though its a GREAT score...
Thank you for entering and participating in my contest and good luck,
~lumin.
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