Heavens above I feel like im falling.
Boy I dont beleive this beat of my heart
Others havnt got my heart crashing
Never heard the thunder this way.
Swirling mass of a volcanoe erupting
Heat escaping warming me through
Then cool tides rushing in
Calming and cooling when things start to burn.
Taking me into warm sweet arms
Wrapping me with natures beauty
You lay me on leaves of green
Making earthquakes rumble
Then comes gently wind to play so softly
A tune to make nature slumber
Deep to delve into unknown dreams
Ending a day perfect like no other
Author notes
The adults should understand what ive written in here tis no childs play LOL
5) FINAL OPTiON: describe in a metaphorical way, what romance means to you. I want to feel the heat, the emotion, the power of your words, Don’t just say it mean it!
Dunkler engel16 - katy
A contest entry
- for Romantic Dreamers ~~ OPEN TO ALL! by PassionsPromise.
1800 points, ended April 19, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what ya think?
Comments
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OH yes
Wow haven't read one like that in a long time...A mind blowingly great use of metaphor and imagery
So well done darl, so well done
Cindy
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Wow hunni
a superb use of metaphors. You have penned a beautiful piece. The flow is spot on, you have really made the prompt your own here. All the best in the contest
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Well penned here. Please include in author notes your name and option.
Thanks
And good luck.
Passions
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