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Forward

 

 

Can you feel me?

Let the rain

of my chocolate

fondue

you

 

 

 

HOT

release the stem

nibble on my breast

while I suck your

Ring

Ding a ling

tingling

I get all wet

bullet proof

love

hugs

back rubs

curling my toes

while my perfume

invade your

nose

I suppose

I am too

forward...

I am getting bored waiting on you

cum over and let me

do

you 

 

 

Can I introduce myself

to your bedsheets..

oooh

baby

please put

me to sleep

 

I'm in heat

weak

at my knees

I want to

tease

please

and ease

my way

today

 

 

I'll give you some time to

divorce that snack,

so that I can feed you

a

 full course meal.

The ultimate steal,

I am for real

my

heels up in the air

silk panties

everywhere.

 Into your eyes I stare.

Take me

anywhere.

 

 

Am I playing fair?

 

~

 

 Moluv and

Burning desires
which were created by your fire
can only be extinguished with
your chocolate rain
shower me with your sweet, seductive
love
let me feel you move
"forward" with your inviting touch
your lips pressed against mine
that would be divine
tasting each other's intentions
agreeing to sip each other's wine
now baby recline
and open those sexy thighs
so i can taste
my chocolate
bunny.....

 

 

Author notes

It is of great pleasure my dear friend moluv10 hit me with this Remix of his talent, and we could not resist in doing this collaboration.

Enjoy.
theLady

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Comments

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  • Kari gold member
    April 5, 2008

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    I bet this was a really delightful and tasty meal to say the least!
    Mouth watering at the very thought of everything already.
    now...I really really want food damn it lol


  • FifthDove
    April 1, 2008

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    I see the full course meal was very satisfying, you are good at turning up the heat through your poetry. Thanks for the entry and best wishes in the group contest


  • D Saul So Sexy
    March 25, 2008

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    on pint and poppin
    you and this guy did yaul
    thang in this here i cant say nuthin
    but keep doin it

    D


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      March 25, 2008
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      Thank you D

      I always appreciate your support and comments on my work.

      Ephiphany


  • HaleyMary
    March 24, 2008

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    Oh, this is one of the hottest writes you have written yet, Sis. Very passionate and seemed naughty, as well. I liked the ending the best. It seemed like it could be metaphorical and also seemed to fit well with the Easter holiday. Wonderful collab piece. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

    • AddictiveTRUTH
      March 24, 2008
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      Thanks lil sis,

      my friend and I put this together, I really enjoyed working with him.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII I fucken love it! You two were mind masturbating and it was hot dammit ! you guys impressed me piffy i simply love love it! o how amazing

    you and maurice did awesome hon
    es for the lady


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      March 24, 2008
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      Awww

      Thank you Love'
      glad we got the approval of the Phenomenal1
      I Love You
      theLady
      For you forever in my


  • moluv10
    March 24, 2008

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    Steamy! Forget steamy, this is on fire! I love it! I love the structure and the energy that is created by your seductive words. Again, I love it! Keep doing your thing Piff!


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      March 24, 2008
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      Thank You, mo


      Had one of my famous moments
      Just messin around today again...bored
      Needed a nap

      I appreciate you


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    Wow,

    Talkin' bout captivating content! Wow, wow, wow!
    Me likes chocolate, likes it alot. LOL.

    Much love sweet soul, Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      March 24, 2008

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      Thanks Timothy

      my soulful brother
      Glad you enjoy sweets
      Just kiddin...I appreciate your comment always.
      E


  • mzmikki
    March 24, 2008
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    Damn.... This makes me want a "nap" too!

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