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"Form Poetry"

Cleaved into sumptuous melody,
Tortured into narrow creativity
Written under freedom's captivity
Is a poem in form poetry.

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  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    April 15, 2008

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    Perfect! Loved the way you wrote this piece! Keep it up and welcome to the finalists!

    Thank's for entering my contest, and good luck!


  • Marcy Anna
    March 24, 2008

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    Oh I love this! It's short and bouncy and matter-of-fact. I love the term "freedom's captivity" because I find that true freedom is living in ones own boundries...the ones that keep you out of trouble
    I really enjoy your take on form poetry.


  • popscenehorror
    March 24, 2008
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    ohhh i adore this!!