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"Breath that is Baited"

For you, for always, I waited,
With breath that is baited.
My heart gave itself in purity,
As I held onto my only virginity.

When you came, we married,
Over the threshold I was carried.
And no longer did I have to wait,
For this man that would be my mate.

For life, and for eternity,
I gave you my virginity.
You took away what made me whole
And found I was not the mate of your soul

So, for you this poor heart waited,
With breath that was forever baited
Only to perish in the longing of ether,
Because breath can not be held forever.

Author notes

in case you didn't pick up on it, but I doubt that anyone didn't, I don't belive in holding oneself for that idea of a soulmate, or even marriage.

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 1, 2008

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    FallenAngel09

    Nicely done. Guess we gotta talk the best thing that comes along n the moment lol. Nice write great rhyme and flow. Thanks for your comment.