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Fairy Tale Ending

Standing in front of your eyes
My beautiful, white dress
I know you're nervous
But please don't stress

Standing at the alter
Hand in hand
Wishing for the best
Hoping for what was planned

Standing by your side
Where I always want to be
It took a lot of persuasion 
I'm glad you finally see

Standing here together
Like we always will
From now and forever
And further still

Standing just me and you
Speaking our vows
Me and you from now on
For as long as time allows

Standing perfectly still
Seeing happy faces
Waiting for tiny children
To fill the missing spaces

Standing the four of us
Our happy happy lives
Even after time ends
Our love survives











A contest entry

This is how I want My life to end but I guess life doesnt always have a fairytale ending! Hope this one fits the critirea Errant x

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  • Frozentearz
    April 17, 2008

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    Congratulations on making it to the next round.
    Look forward to seeing you there.
    Warm thoughts.
    Frozentearz


  • Polaja Greeters member
    March 29, 2008

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    This is a beautiful picture of your dreams for the future... I hope that everything comes true for you I wish you the best of luck in the contest!

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • HaleyMary
    March 24, 2008

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    Beautiful write. I think it's very true that love can survive. Even when life seems to be hard at times, there is always hope that in the future everything will work out for the best. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.