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pt...Unforgettable

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When the sun rises above the horizon

you will remember the brightness               

                                       of my smile

The warmth of my heart

                         the sound of my voice

my loving you all the while

 

When you're in a crowd of people

as you go about your day

You will search for my face

and remember how we played

 

You'll remember our conversations

how we laughed and sang a song

How we joked and teased each other

did things we knew were wrong

 

When the rain falls upon you

on a dreary rainy day

You'll remember how you hurt me

with thing you'd sometimes say

 

When a soft breeze blows around you

and it tingles the hair on your arms

You want to reach and touch me

and enjoy my sensual charms

 

When the sun sets in the evening

and you enjoy the colorful hue

You'll remember the times we cuddled

and how much I loved you

 

I know you won't forget me

or the mask that covers my eyes

As I lie in a darkened space

and the wind echos my sombering cries

 

 

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  • chiefmac
    March 9

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    The reader clutches a hand to help being led into realtionships which make life work. Support for each other, love to share embracing strength to cuddle. So true to life with share emotions Consistent sound aspect with poetic technique.


  • NeonRose
    March 25, 2008
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    A sad refrain, soulfully penned. Good luck in this contest.


  • old dog
    March 24, 2008
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    This is truly beautiful,
    and an unforgettable romantic poem.

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