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Light Is There, Yet It's A Dream.

im sitting in the dark
waiting in beautiful silence
looking at the black smeared across the walls

i sit here thinking about life
and its purpose
wanting so much more

the moon shines through the window
it makes one corner of the room light up
but turn out that light, and we're collapsed in darkness again

no matter how much light you bring upon the world
darkness can always cover it
and i'll always be sitting in the dark.

A contest entry

it kind of gives you an imagination into the world, right?

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    March 27, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie


  • Kassandra Nyktos
    March 24, 2008

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    I like this..... it's really quite good, I think you'd be someone I'd like to get to know better, as you remind me of myself a couple years ago.... and I really like your poetry. Also I just noticed you live in Illinois too!


    Kass


  • peridotPixi
    March 24, 2008

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    cool

    i like this poem it does tell about the beautiful side of dark, allthough it doesn't tell much about the picture, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy