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Dough

I like to write
To compose a phrase
Create a piece
Script a story
A mix of words
Play with them
dough in my head
inked
scrawled on a pad
Dance, twirl these
thoughts, ideas
string like lights across
a porch on a warm
breezy night and watch
the flashes catch
the flashes of fireflies
Sparking, igniting
provoking such the smell
of the bread around
the corner on the windowsill
of the kitchen that baked it
Ink stained my fingers
sticky
like the dough on my hand

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Gypsie Ink
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  • Play Pretend.
    May 29, 2008

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    Nice job.
    I don't care much for the format, but thats not a real
    big issue. I like your creativity and overall wording on this one.
    Thank You for entering my contest.