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The Wish

I wish I knew the thoughts
the tumble of words
running through your head.

One million questions, have I
about the way you see me.
I wish I could hear the words you
speak

silently

when you brush your lips against mine.
I wish you would tell me what you hear
from within
when you see tears upon my face.

I wish you could say to me
all the things you feel
that make saying "I love you" such an easy
mantra.

I look at you and see...

e v e r y t h i n g.

You touch me
and I want to weep
with joy.

You look away and say...

n o t h i n g,

and a little piece of me dies.

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  • writerofshadows
    April 1, 2008

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    i like it. it seems conflict. happy and sad at the same time. like you love some one but know that they're slowly slipping through your fingers and you clinging to the happy memories to make it last as long as possible.