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he lives in our lungs









          Someone shouted in the woods
          “this sap smells like, looks like,
          blood!”

          and our screams were drowned
          by the roaring noise
          of their machines.






Author notes

'They slit our throats
Like we were flowers'
-MM-

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  • Desire gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    OMG~~



    This is one Powerful piece You have penned my Friend and so tugs at the Heartstrings
    Brilliant!

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Grimoire
    March 25, 2008
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    congrats on the bronze


  • Naridill gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    What implied imagery! An intriguing yet stampede of mixed reactions from this piece.
    Thanks for entering,